11/21 Class Minutes

Today's is a big update! Our game is coming along nicely and nearly finished. We have some heavy texturing to do, some sound changes, and polish - but we're nearly there. We presented an early version of our final sell presentation today, along with our newest build. We got great feedback and positive input, and it felt really great to finally hear that our product is become impressive.

Here's the notes I took today on both our sell presentation and our game demo.

Sell feedback (The number corresponds with the slide number)
2. Make the 'imagine' parts pop up one at a time
3. after 'you hear noise', jump to 'now you're on a spaceship'. Not straight to Game Start screen.
4. After 'on a ship', then game screen.
5. ??
6. Blend art and story here, don't separate. Incorporate screenshots. This goes for other slides too
7. Intended audience is good, just put intended rating as well
8. Introduce character > story > what player doing > intended audience (in that order)
9. Don't list individually. Maybe ditch slide. As we put images, we can mention some of these things. Demonstrate these, don't list. Video?
10. Include this on the story
11. Include this after story? Gameplay slide? Can go into small detail as to how the creature is finding you (heatmap)
12. Great slide. Maybe get scale, get better pose of Henry. However, this is a little deceptive to in game - creature seems smaller in game than this screen. Reared up pose in game to demonstrate size and fear?
13. don't break this out. concept art is great, try to get matching screen shot. This doesn't need its own slide, should be in gameplay explanation
14. This screen shot could go with story. don't title 'Demo Scenario'
15. good, same as above
16. this shouldnt be seperate slide. incorporate these slides throughout
17. get updated gun model. ditch concept art. this goes with gameplay, doesn't need its own slide. Have gun pictured with energy pickups, show they work together.
18. have gameplay demo, then Question?

- Less lists and back and forth
- Video right before game screen? Want to give them sense of fear before game screen.
- Too much back and forth between story and gameplay, have it flow better.
- If we show Henry, needs better poses and look.
- Introduce Henry before explicit story. explain why he's the only one. show game screen, then talk about Genry and why he's only one there
Demo
- Audio/visual clue when pickup ammo
- More monster audio
- Make generator spin, turn on lights? make it more obvious that its now on. give more payoff, a clue as to what's next? cliffhanger!
- Footsteps frequency needs to be upped
- More scares! valves and pipes bursting? lights that were on turning off?